Hey chels. I think your book series is coming along quite well. The onle thing that i would pay attention to is hierachy. The first book is working well, but when i look at the other two i look at the image before i look at the type. Im not sure if that whats your trying to achieve, if you are great job, if not; then i would think about makeing your text stand out a little more from your image. maybe making the type bigger. Great Work! I really love the notebook idea on the flaps.
I love the direction you chose and I think that you have made a lot of progress since the last critique! You are making the diary concept clear and the images and type all work well together. I agree with Krista about the type and I would say rule 10 could use a little work. The type on the spine of the book is kind of hard to read and the thin eight of the authors name is difficult from far away. Other then that they are looking great!
Hey chels. I think your book series is coming along quite well. The onle thing that i would pay attention to is hierachy. The first book is working well, but when i look at the other two i look at the image before i look at the type. Im not sure if that whats your trying to achieve, if you are great job, if not; then i would think about makeing your text stand out a little more from your image. maybe making the type bigger. Great Work! I really love the notebook idea on the flaps.
ReplyDeleteI love the direction you chose and I think that you have made a lot of progress since the last critique! You are making the diary concept clear and the images and type all work well together. I agree with Krista about the type and I would say rule 10 could use a little work. The type on the spine of the book is kind of hard to read and the thin eight of the authors name is difficult from far away. Other then that they are looking great!
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